After reading the feedback i will change the way that the first sketch opens to minimize the cost of shooting in a high street. Instead i will start the sketch in the actual dating club. As well for this sketch i will change how the sketch portrays the comedy of homosexual/transvestite side so it will not be offensive to people who are actually transvestite's or homosexual. Lastly i will build upon the third sketch as it is quite brief and does not spend enough time building up to the comedy part of the scene.
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